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posted January 9th, 2011, 12:32 am


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January 10th, 2011, 1:02 am

Ash(or Rayquaza) (Guest)

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Cool drawings and a cool main character! i like this story!!!:D

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January 10th, 2011, 7:39 am

Adrian Ravenhart

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hehee,oh sorry if u've noticed the last panel has problem.somtin wrong with the girl's legs!anyway thanks,plz look forward for more..^^

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January 10th, 2011, 9:51 am

Pinali

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Your drawings and panels are amazing, but your texts (in speech bubble, thought...) are badly placed and the font is not really good, makes it hard to read..
you should look for someone English to check your writing, and perhaps to place them nicely in the bubbles so it doesnt go off the sides! :D

gonna watch you anyway cause this is great!

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January 10th, 2011, 11:03 pm

Adrian Ravenhart

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thanx.yeaq,i'm aware of dat sometimes.i keep typing n erasing to get a clean shot for dialogues,but still can't get it rite.i should analysed 1st b4 drawing the bubles huh?font?so comic san font isnt suitable?

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